Comments on: The language of The Cubs http://lbsmith.wordpress.com/2007/04/18/the-language-of-the-cubs/ Just another WordPress.com weblog Sun, 22 Apr 2007 00:08:26 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Sally Garcia http://lbsmith.wordpress.com/2007/04/18/the-language-of-the-cubs/#comment-15 Sally Garcia Sun, 22 Apr 2007 00:08:26 +0000 http://lbsmith.wordpress.com/2007/04/18/the-language-of-the-cubs/#comment-15 I agree with your comments on The Cubs, in particular, I think your identification of energy, liveliness and animation are great for a story about young people who can be so full of life (all those cells reproducing so fast). I found it fascinating to read, like you, and I know the ambiguity that some of the sentences held could be maddening; however, I don't think that the ambiguity kept the reader from understanding what was going on in the story. Sally I agree with your comments on The Cubs, in particular, I think your identification of energy, liveliness and animation are great for a story about young people who can be so full of life (all those cells reproducing so fast).

I found it fascinating to read, like you, and I know the ambiguity that some of the sentences held could be maddening; however, I don’t think that the ambiguity kept the reader from understanding what was going on in the story. Sally

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